One in a Million

Disaster stikes.

Animals wail.

Trees fall.

Chainsaws growl.

Animals run.

Dusty air.

The rainforest is one in a million

and we are killing it.

Do you care?

 

(the last sentance "Do you care?" is to have the credit go to Daniel Thomas Andrew Daly)

Reviews

[Emmy]

I care! ;.;

[R.E. Dufour]

This is so true Im right with u on this one

[Mysty Rayn]

This is such a great piece to make people think. An inspiration.

[Teenage poet]

An imaculous ( who knows if i spelled that right) and powerful poem. People should care more about the important things and your poem expresses that. Its right to the point. Keep up the good writing, and dont let anyone change your mind about it.

[Saturnalia]

Gave me chills. Very creative sentence structure and format.

[Evil_Angel]

Short, sweet and to the point. A very important message, I wish people cared more about the rainforest too. Great job. :)

[Daniel Thomas Andrew Da..]

Dramatic two word sentences. Logical moral lesson in last sentence. (perhaps, a suggested additonal last sentence. 'Do you care?' )

[Mintwhiskers]

Wonderful I was thinking of riting a poem like this but u will do it better