Ode to Lucky

Though you died at a young age

and I was only two

you were close to my heart.

That day we went to the vet

to lay you down for eternal sleep

I felt like I cried until I ran dry.

I would have to say even though your name was Lucky

you were'nt so lucky

Reviews

[Emmy]

Oh, Luckyy. ;_;

[Adela Muresan]

Sad.
Even dough you present a unpleasant event, your love for ,,Lucky,, is penned in a sincere sweet way.

Nice.

A.M.

[Noel]

That was sad, but it was well written.

[Daniel Thomas Andrew Da..]

An excellent example of an ode for your age. As you grow, your vocabulary, sentence structure, and the lessons of your life experience, will help you embellish such other possible odes with a greater sense of drama and flair. Keep at it.

[Mintwhiskers]

Wonderful I like how u write about ur pets