Life

Life is like the sea,

it rolls over unsteady ground.

Life is like the sky at night,

shimmering through the dark.

Life is like a flower,

it blooms into the most beautiful things.

Life is a mystery,

you never know what will happen next.

Life is unknown, we will never know its secrets.

Reviews

[Adela Muresan]

Life in your poem is just like creation, nevertheless a wonderful miracle taking shape in every place.
Wonderful poem and picture selection.

A.M.

[Gandré]

this was a clear message. utterly sweet. Life is a mystery, --------and we women keep our mystery, for we love to play.
gandr�

[NightDream]

Very well put! You captured a very elaborate topic in a simple and lovely way, great job! Hopefully you have such a positive and open view of the world forever.

[Carole]

I really like your analogies on Life...You are right on with every single one of them. These are my favorites of the ones you mentioned:

Life is like a flower,

it blooms into the most beautiful things.

Life is a mystery,

you never know what will happen next.

Well done! Carole

[chord0]

very nice poem, would be a nice entry for the poetry contest about Nature.

[Daniel Thomas Andrew Da..]

Excellent

[Tuff Stuff]

THis is really good. I like piglet. She's the best in Winnie the pooh!
:)

[Mintwhiskers]

that is nice ur 2nd best poem do u like my pic