Life

Life

A Poem by lots fo love ♥

Life is like the sea,

it rolls over unsteady ground.

Life is like the sky at night,

shimmering through the dark.

Life is like a flower,

it blooms into the most beautiful things.

Life is a mystery,

you never know what will happen next.

Life is unknown, we will never know its secrets.

© 2008 lots fo love ♥


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Very well done! Great job! *smiles*

Posted 16 Years Ago


Simple, but written very well. LIfe is like...and then you expound on that. Nice job. Def original.

kena

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very well written! I enjoyed reading this!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Life is so much that is never seen or understood. Life is exactly what we make it out to be. I enjoyed your deeply personal look at a few of the things that life means to you. You heart seems to have a purity that seeks for something more than what it has known.


Great Job!!!!!!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Isn't that the truth! Very nicely done and so true!

Posted 16 Years Ago


These are all such nicely thought out similes. You obviously spent some time thinking this out. I commend you for your insight and your ability to express what lies within you!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Life is full of secrets until we open our eyes and take the time to see and try to understand them. Well done!

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is kind of inspiring. I'll have to remember to read it when I'm having a bad day. :) Thank you.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I dont think life has any secrets.
because i dont think it keeps anything from us.
I think we keep ourselves from it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful. Instant fav.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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