Some Where In My Past....

Some Where In My Past....

A Poem by Meg

I saw you dancing last night

Hoping he would finally notice

Having that little twinkle in your eye

For that one little thought of happiness

Movements so smooth and preciese

Flowing effortlessly

I saw the blazing fire in your heart

As you watched him pass without a word

As if he didn't even know you

Passion  is all you knew

Wearing you heart on your sleeve

Not caring about vaulnerability

Just wanting a word

Just a thought

From him

From the father you don't even know....

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Meg


Author's Note

Meg
i'm horrble at grammer , so ignore it please

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This really touched my heart a wonderful write. In your biography you said you were a teenager who didn't 'think you were good enough for anyone or anything. Well God must have thought you were pretty special or you wouldn't be here.

Posted 16 Years Ago


That was amazing, I love this. It has a touch of great imagery and emotion playing throughout the whole thing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Meg
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