High In Your Arms

High In Your Arms

A Poem by Meg
"

....uh sappy?

"

Love me when i'm with you

love me when i'm gone

but most of all love me

when it comes naturally

just atomatically

be true to me 

i'll be true to you 

be good to me 

i'll be good to you 

all i'm asking is

for you to love me

ETERNALLY

© 2008 Meg


Author's Note

Meg
lack of experiance , so format is all wrong

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I like it a lot. Maybe the capitalized eternally a the end could be normal. I don't know, I just think crazy font and capitalization draws away from the writing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yeah. your right, sappy, but I like.

Posted 16 Years Ago


i like it =]

Posted 16 Years Ago



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