If I Died Tonight

would you care if i died tonight
that i left, i lost the fight
that I'm fading,out of sight
no one remembers their own rights

'cause when i lay here,
my heart starts to pound
my old memories found
I'm lost without a sound
would you cry if i died tonight?

My wrists blood red
A pretty picture instead
This is where it led  
I'm starting to dread
what would you do if i died tonight?

would you stay up and scream
to make me redeem
my life so it seems
while you blow of  steam
what would you do if i died tonight?

would you get over it
or just watch and sit
trying to fit
crying a  bit
my memories lit
would you remember me if i died tonight?

alone in my room
facing the gloom
time starts to zoom
hiding in the loom
lost in your own doom
if i died tonight...

Author's Note

what do you think of the rhythm? x
thanks for reading

Reviews

[Nabeeha Mustafa]

Such words :') Impressive!