I don't want the reader to know more than any of the characters know at any point in time, so if you have any questions, the characters do as well. Let me know about anything that could use more detail. These are excerpts of my dreams, and tend to be just as random as they are.
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i like the story i haven't read it all yet, but it still could use some work, there are a bit of grammer mistakes and could use more details and scenery, and it could also use a bit more of other things, i just can't think of the words at the moment, but other than that its a good story, i like it. If you need any help just ask and i will help out the best i can...