Summer 09

I can breathe.

The air is finally thinning and the clouds are splitting up.

The sun is out and things aint as tough

It's summer time now

And things are becoming new.

I'm ready to have some fun and I'm ready to dance with you.

So dance with me till we have to go home

Dance with me, no on has to know.

I want to feel alive

I want to be free

But most of all I just want you to be with me

And to be with you

And to be with me

That is truely the feeling of being free.

 

Reviews

[Mariah Mcintyre]

thanks so much for your reviews :) this poem means a lot to me. It's hard for me to just let go and be happy sometimes and this really helps me accomplish that.

[deeps]

This is a very wonderful and beuatiful write here

[Orlando Murcia]

Very sweet and romantic
such a beautiful poem

Great work

Orlando M

[Glenna.]

That was very lovely!
I really enjoyed reading it, because I absolutely ADORE summertime.
Your poem has great flow and was well-written. :)

[Jessica]

very well written, I liked it!
And i def. have the same feeling!
Thanks god it's summer!