My Future Reality

My first real poem

As I live my life

As I lay sleepless every night

Wondering if it is all real

Of if it is worth it to feel

The truth of my reality

Has plagued my everyday normality

Will I fly with an angel

Or go down with the devil

Will I go to Heaven's paradise

Where the suffering of war has no right

A place where dreams come true

And friends stick by you through and through

Where the light never stops shining

And the people will never be lying

About the truth of the most important thing

The never ending fantasy

Or will I go to damnation

Where peace is not known in any nation

Where the user's, traitors and criminals

Feel the pain of those who they made miserable

Will the searing fires of this world

Hurt after time and toil

Will freedom be within reach of my hand

But never be obtained for ones in this cursed land

So now you know the thought

That has made me sleep not

Where will i end up

When my time alive has become naught

Heaven and its shining positive

Or hell and its evil negative

Help me those who do not bask in normality

Determine what will be my future reality

Author's Note

Because this is my first real poem I would like any type of advice you can give

Reviews

[Sarah J Dhue]

It is pretty good. It makes you think... could your dreams have some bearing on your future reality? Good write