A Place I Could Be

An emotional poem for when you feel like theres nothing left to do than just cry alone

A Place I Could Be

 

I wish there was a place,

Where I could be;

With no one else there,

Except for me.

 

A small private place,

Where I could just cry;

Whenever I feel like,

My world's gonna die.

 

And if there was really,

A place like this;

To be there right now,

Is my only wish.

:/

 

Author's Note

I made this poem while I was going through some hard times with my friendships and family.

Reviews

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

Firstly fantastic poem Really loved the flow and the structure of this piece I can feel all the emotion that emits from this poem you are very gifted in the way that you can express such deep emotions that will connect with many people
secondly I think the idea overall is just so original and the wanting to have that secret place is perfect very well done
my favourite line well to be honest is start to finish the only criticism I could make is that I wish it could be longer maybe describe the ideal place to give more depth I cant wait to read more of your work keep them coming

[cfix]

Dang, you express this feeling so well,
I like it, I have so felt this way so mnay times.
Love this piece.

[lostdiadem]

Thank you very much :D i wish i made it longer too, because to me it seemed a little short too

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Yes, you said it!