this is amazing. you've captured the spirit of being a rockstar, the energy that flows through your band and the audience. there are the typical types out there that uplifts you into everything, you are everything, the music, the sex, idol, god...the empowerment of being up there performing is the highest high one can get when everyone becomes one with your music. then you're done with your set and you go back to your life, which to me, is not dull at all because you are an artist who does his art. excellent rhythm, complements the scene and the energy of the club. reminded me of jim morrison.
Love the imagery, this had me right there in a bar hearing the boom boom and smelling the smoke! Ecellent reading! Are we heading there on your bike next?
You're quiet the party man, aren't you? All the great imagery had me there dancing and partying. Hope I don't wake up with a hang over LOL! Awesome job!
Talk about reality! I love this, it positively lives, smells, noises, excites .. it's power, it's adventure, it's having it 'all' .. and then, that ending .. oh my, that's a feeling that's right on the nose. Back to the ordinary dull life.
' .. give me power ~ I am drunk with it ~ I am sex ~ I am idol ~ I am god ..'
putting me in the ciggerett smoke you make a sight seeing stench of the alcahol and waves through the air from the sound of the band... where you put me in the ciggerett smoke.. I feel music in the waves of the air im in which intensifys the sight seeing stench of alcahol and brings me to the level of the people, which of course is connected to the music.. good brad, keep flowing connectivly and beautifully.
lol You know hon...before I got half way through..I was thinking of The Doors! :)
Blistering this is and the life of a star...smokey scenes...mayhem schemes....brilliantly infused with reality!
So cool love!
xx
Whew! Glad I got outta that poem alive. How quickly you make us a part of the audience, the stench of beer, urine and vomit, the blown speakers cranked wide open...and yet We're having FUN!
Awesome, as always Bradley.