a break in the clouds...

something light and sugar free

Bright eyes

Sunshine smile

Burn this tear

On my cheek

That has fallen

Too many times to count

Dust me off

Clean me up

You make the heart beat faster

My dark cloud

Dissipates

Loses cohesion

The bricks around my heart

Crumble

But only a little

Because I keep one foot

In the grave

So I won’t fall far

Should you drop me…

Author's Note

who's to say what makes me who i am?

Reviews

[No use.]

my latest poem i haven't posted yet, is not like this, but ends with a similar rhythm, telling me we would be horrible dance partners :P

with that said, you wanna know my reason for keeping one foot in the grave...so i won't kill you should you move me! :O

[Searching 4 Serenity]

Only YOU. Your own truth, your own happiness, your one love(partner, family, friends, supporters) makes you who you are. Add a little *sugar* to the diet of trust. But as we all know, too much will cause spoil and rot.

[Vanessa Rico]

Very great read!