your life...

your life...

A Poem by Brad
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all in all is all we are

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Your life is protected by carefully placed defense mechanisms. Layer upon layer of security checkpoints. Some alarms are tripped some are accessed by the right password. Some people jealously glare at others with the access codes. We judge each other by what level of security clearance we hold in our wallets. I am the big bad wolf, and I am going to huff and I’ll puff and I’ll blow your house down.

© 2010 Brad


Author's Note

Brad
automatons...seek, locate, exterminate

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I love it.........speaks volumes about us as a tribe really....... Some are so me
Layer upon layer of security checkpoints. Some alarms are tripped some are accessed by the right password.

So are you coming to blow my house down?!
Love your work, gets right down to the bare emotion within.


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I love it.........speaks volumes about us as a tribe really....... Some are so me
Layer upon layer of security checkpoints. Some alarms are tripped some are accessed by the right password.

So are you coming to blow my house down?!
Love your work, gets right down to the bare emotion within.


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You will be assimilated.....

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

whoo... this is really different from what I expected... I prefer how you normally write, but that aside, well written. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh man I totally loved this esec...the last 3 lines. cute and enjoyable to read.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sorry, I'm an autobot. I only answer to Optimus Prime.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hahaha - I laugh but I'd rather weep - all too true.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jealous much, Brad.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

press, click, explode

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the analogies you use here.. unfortunately.. they are all true..
I have to agree with Paul.. very unique, I liked it very much!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

excellent , prepare for next phase ..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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