sleeping sun

i'm not sure what the hell this is

Blood red sun

Sinks deep

Into the ocean

About

The waves carried by current

Shimmer like

A live water colour

The crimson star

Giving inspiration

To lover, artist, poet…

I am

Beneath

The wave of human growth

Drowning

In anothers progress…

Author's Note

i think maybe i stared at the sun too long...

Reviews

[David W Moore III]

I'm going to go with what is it? Pretty cool that's what. Nice imagery. The end seems a bit disconnected but I think that's what you were going for as it seems to be speaking of being left behind.

Are you seeing sun spots?

[Wolf]

amazing i love how you can always catch my attention with your subtle conclusions keep it up man i give it a 100/100