the beats of my heart...
A Poem by Brad
for my daughters...who aren't afraid to fly
Little me
Little you
We would sail
The ocean blue
Ride the winds
Upon a kite
Wander lands
Where dragons fight
Hand in hand
Face to face
We’ll explore
The outer space
Drift about
the starry sea
imaginations
of you and me
dearest daughters
dearest loves
who taught this father
to rise above…
© 2010 Brad
Author's Note
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for una leigh and kathryn "skoots" coral...for putting up with a step father with an over active imagination...
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Reviews
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This is so sweet! Your stepdaughters are lucky to have you. I love the rhyming and stuff, great word choices. I love it.
Love, Jami
P.S. Sorry if this doesn't make sense...I'm on an iPod.
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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I love that you write these poems to your daughters... it is so imaginative and sweet... something to read before they go to sleep... love it! :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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This is so sweet, I enjoyed this write.
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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yes, and amen to this one
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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i like it it's sweet and innocent
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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the beat feels strong ~ fly on those wings of imagination ~
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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beyuuuuutiful!!!!~ you're such a good daddy!!!~ =)~
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on October 25, 2010
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