the beats of my heart...

the beats of my heart...

A Poem by Brad
"

for my daughters...who aren't afraid to fly

"

Little me

Little you

We would sail

The ocean blue

Ride the winds

Upon a kite

Wander lands

Where dragons fight

Hand in hand

Face to face

We’ll explore

The outer space

Drift about

the starry sea

imaginations

of you and me

dearest daughters

dearest loves

who taught this father

to rise above…

 

© 2010 Brad


Author's Note

Brad
for una leigh and kathryn "skoots" coral...for putting up with a step father with an over active imagination...

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This is so sweet! Your stepdaughters are lucky to have you. I love the rhyming and stuff, great word choices. I love it.

Love, Jami

P.S. Sorry if this doesn't make sense...I'm on an iPod.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love that you write these poems to your daughters... it is so imaginative and sweet... something to read before they go to sleep... love it! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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This is so sweet, I enjoyed this write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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yes, and amen to this one

Posted 14 Years Ago


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i like it it's sweet and innocent

Posted 14 Years Ago


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the beat feels strong ~ fly on those wings of imagination ~

Posted 14 Years Ago


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beyuuuuutiful!!!!~ you're such a good daddy!!!~ =)~

Posted 14 Years Ago


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