the beats of my heart...
A Poem by
Brad
for my daughters...who aren't afraid to fly
Little me
Little you
We would sail
The ocean blue
Ride the winds
Upon a kite
Wander lands
Where dragons fight
Hand in hand
Face to face
We’ll explore
The outer space
Drift about
the starry sea
imaginations
of you and me
dearest daughters
dearest loves
who taught this father
to rise above…
© 2010 Brad
Author's Note
for una leigh and kathryn "skoots" coral...for putting up with a step father with an over active imagination...
Reviews
Just remember the lesson bro
Damn fine work
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This is a different style for you - I like it very much.
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is a different style for you - I like it very much.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
What a beautiful and fitting poem for your daughters...........I bet they love your wonderful imagination!
Posted 14 Years Ago
What a beautiful and fitting poem for your daughters...........I bet they love your wonderful imagination!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
What a wonderful way to express your love for them.
Posted 14 Years Ago
What a wonderful way to express your love for them.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
nice..
Posted 14 Years Ago
nice..
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Ah, wow :) This is stunning! They give such light and hope!
Beautiful poem love!
xx
Posted 14 Years Ago
Ah, wow :) This is stunning! They give such light and hope!
Beautiful poem love!
xx
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
... gosh this makes me want to run to my father and renew our relationship lol
Posted 14 Years Ago
... gosh this makes me want to run to my father and renew our relationship lol
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
wow...simply put a smile on my face..that's what being a daddy is all about :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
wow...simply put a smile on my face..that's what being a daddy is all about :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
No, not putting up with... EMBRACING that imaginative brain... for it is what inspires them to fly. Beautiful dedication to the two most important females in your life.
Posted 14 Years Ago
No, not putting up with... EMBRACING that imaginative brain... for it is what inspires them to fly. Beautiful dedication to the two most important females in your life.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Good stuff man!!!!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Good stuff man!!!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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