welcome...

welcome...

A Poem by Brad
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everyone's had a bottle of this at one time or another...

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swallow me
engulf me
take me down
i welcome your blackness
your infinite despair
endless depths of brown-eyed depression
passing through a dark wind
permeates me
saturates me
drowns me
another drink

© 2010 Brad


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never drink on an empty heart...well penned

Posted 14 Years Ago


Yes, indeed, we've all been there~in that bottle of depression'
another drink, to think and sink so very low~

Posted 14 Years Ago


I never drink.........and this sums up why..........very dark view of what drinking can do to you, and its not nice. Fabulous imagery, and one to pass around all those drunk teens in the UK at weekends!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

and that's why I avoid any and all mind altering substances like the plague~

Posted 14 Years Ago


Well this will make a good excuse for tonights imbibing!

And assuredly we have all shared this bottle...so write it out my friend, and get on to those stories about unicorns and rainbows you promised

Posted 14 Years Ago



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