Q -n- A

i don't rhyme often, i hate it, but this time it fit, and the answer to the questions lie within....

have You evEr cut your wriSts
watch the blood spout and spit
have You ever takEn that pill
within your mind the blackneSs fills
have You brEathed in the fumeS
lungs filling with poisoned plume
have You Ever taSted a tear
when You'vE loSt someone dear
have you ever felt maddening rage
and displaYEd it for all on Stage
have You evEr hung from a Sheet
lost consciousness as you wiggled your feet
have you ever chewed on the end of a gun
just one squeeze could end your fun

 

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

have You Ever taSted a tear
when You'vE loSt someone dear
have you ever felt maddening rage
and displaYEd it for all on Stage

no,no. no.to the beginning. yes,yes, yes, to the above, and no to the dark ending

A powerful piece of poetry well crafted and deeply expressed

[Doreen]

Again with the depressing end-it-all write. Don't get me wrong, this is very well written, but wow does this pack a punch. I surely hope your answer is no.

[Antonio Valentino]

"You Ever taSted a tear
when You'vE loSt someone dear
have you ever felt maddening rage
and displaYEd it for all on Stage"

These I have... the rest, no, thank god, that doesn't mean I'm not capable of such feelings, none of us are.

Dug this friend, one has to burrow deep to discover feelins such as this.
Antonio

[Marianne]

No, I haven't tried any of the above, BUT I have sat staring into 'nothingness', wishing there was a button I could press to end this void...I was so deplete of ALL energy.

Dark writing comes easier than any other genre, right ??!!!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

dark dark dark midnight train going nowhere good~ stop that! =)~

and no~ I haven't~