Untitled

Sit,lie, and wait forever

you can contemplate your day

or maybe just contemplate yourself

Sit, and think about what you've gained

Wait forever to take back what you lost

Lie about your happiness,

that's the cost..

or maybe just fib to fit into your skin

This is all too personal don't you think?

Well honey, don't take it personally

Go take your clothes off

Maybe they'll love you

Show what God gave you

Maybe they'll praise you

Go out there and fake it

Hope it won't phase you. 

Cry, lie and die forever

you can contemplate what's in your heart 

or we could just be together

cry about the emptiness you've gained 

Lie, say that you don't feel the same

Our love was a lie

Then again so was my orgasm

Definition's been warped

Nothing means the same anymore

Pull heaven down without a sound

We all know that's physically impossible

It's gonna make a big loud bang.

Author's Note

If you have a title mention one. I feel it's not complete because I don't know where else to take it yet at the same time I feel it's finished. Your opinion?

Reviews

[Lighthouse Call]

I love the stops in the start of the verse.
Cry, lie and die forever.. < those 3 stops
Its very good way to emphasise on emotions.
I honestly didn't get the whole picture, the complete picture.
Something I understand is the way you show your anger, in a completly calm mode..
Reminds me of one tree hill
"I cheated on you".. "okay".. "no you shouldnt be okay, you should be angry at me.." "okay"
(something like that).. he was saying ok to make her feel guilty and kind of as a payback. Maybe that explained what I had in mind.. I don't know.
The song is finished.. A song doesn't need an ending. When there's something else, you write a new song. Emotions change and so should the song.
As for the title, you left it blank cause you felt empty inside?
If so, Untitled is a perfect name.