Miami

Oh this town
filled with sand and life
from ocean to drive
known for the area code that sleeps at four

Oh this town
how can you be so cruel
like human nature
you're beautiful and merciless
Corruption built your towers
then again corruption
brings up everything

Smiles to my lenses
Miami lies through it
A city so beautiful
yet so tainted with hate

oh town you're so cruel
Yet compassionate
Brutal to natives
compassion to foreign

Oh Miami
I'll never love you

Author's Note

Probabely serious critiqing?

Reviews

[Annie29]

One word,
GREAT.
I had a thrill reading this.
How you described Miami underneath all the 'beautiful and merciless'.
Corruption played a big part in this and it was a part well played.
Nice work (:

[deeps]

I enjoyed this one. I thought it was wonderful.
Such intense emotion. Well written.

[Mark]

Oh Miami, and I thought you were so sexy.