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A Poem by lorrainelobotomy

i am intricate

unlike you

i have

delicate

feelings,

senses.

i am an unexplored territory.

i am the same

as you on the

outside.

yet, on the inside

i am

completely

unique.

 

 

call me cliche.

© 2008 lorrainelobotomy


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Unique on the outside as well! Take away the last line, it's perfect without it :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


You are unique, just like everybody else....;)
Nice.

Posted 15 Years Ago


this is great! It's got good emotion. I really like it for some reason; there's beauty in the words. Good write.
-michelle

Posted 15 Years Ago



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lorrainelobotomy
lorrainelobotomy

whitinsville, MA



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im lorraine. this is what i do, and this is what i want to do for the rest of my life. more..

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