Fucked.

Fucked.

A Poem by lorrainelobotomy
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a little something i wrote after getting over 2 weeks of writers block. one of my favorites, it just clicked.

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You're a sucker for boys with long hair,

who bite bottom lips and shoulders.

The boys who promise to be there,

but never show up.

Silly you, keep waiting,

'till your stomach runs amok.

You're a wreck and somehow he's the one who's going to clean you up.

The V at his lower abdomen turns you on,

so you get butterflies when he takes his shirt off.

The look in his eyes is telling you to get on top.

You wake up,

he's gone,

and that's when you really know you are fucked.

© 2008 lorrainelobotomy


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Wow...this one is to the point. No holding back here. Great write. Thanks for entering it into the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I love this writing. i have to say that it is so truthful! i love the ending
Great write

Posted 16 Years Ago


that "v" is probably the sexiest thing on a guy. period.

Posted 16 Years Ago


dude,
this was wicked good.
i love it.
i love how this is basically everyones lives.
love the ending too.

Posted 16 Years Ago


love it

Posted 16 Years Ago


hahaha love the ending.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on May 1, 2008

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lorrainelobotomy
lorrainelobotomy

whitinsville, MA



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im lorraine. this is what i do, and this is what i want to do for the rest of my life. more..

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