Adore.

#4

Remember when you held my hand?

We slept together and fell in love.

We watched the grass grow green with spring.

You were the one I  was looking for.

You were the one that I adored.

I miss those days.

I want them back.

Author's Note

not my best.

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

We watched the grass grow green with spring.

This is gentle and sweet with love and longing. I like it. Thanks for entering the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.

[n]

This is written very well!
I don't care if it's your best or your worst, it is great.
I like the way it's worded.

Great job.

[Pakino]

It is well wirtten. Very simple I like it. You can sowrk on it and flush it up more. But its a very sweet poem haha

[Kitty]

Although you may not think it's your best, it is nicely written. It's a subject we can all relate to.

Great job!!!

Josie

[Dani California]

"You were the one I was looking for.
You were the one that I adored.
I miss those days.
I want them back."


But great nonetheless! You so simply captured the reason behind most failed relationships.... which is because these four lines were not properly expressed at some point and became anger; resentment; indifference. Great write! Kudos!