Life

life isn't good or bad, life is what you make out of it.

You created your life 

Your body 

Your pain

Your goals

Your depression 

Your wishes 

Your limits

Your dreams

Your thoughts

Your friends

Your family 

Your teachers

Your boyfriend

Your girlfriend

Your job 

Your enemies 

Your soulmates 

Your fears 

Your tears 

Your addictions 

Your happiness 

Your home

Author's Note

not sure about this...feedback?

Reviews

[Shannon]

This could possibly be the most unusual feedback ever.
I feel like there is the opportunity to change the lines around to create a bit more visual flow, perhaps staring with the shortest, getting longer, then moving back to shorter. this might give the eye the sense that what has been created is good or ok, like the content of the poem.
Sorry if this is too weird...

[justdandy]

This is amazing. The simplest things are the most important. Your piece is really important. We decide the future for ourselves. Karma and Fate do not take the lead role, they are just there to help. Full Ratings.

[Lola]

Yes, if you realize this, you'll see the world in a different light, it's beautiful! Thank you so much :)

[Joe W]

Wow. The message is so simple but at the same time, it really opens up the mind and allows us to reflect on more than just one thing at once. I love it.

[Lola]

thank you so much :)