soon

I knew it all along

•••

soon and never

 two different words

the meaning was the same 

never saw him again

••• 

Author's Note

feedback would help, I'm not sure if it sounds good...

Reviews

[Joe W]

Like the simplicity of this really and the truth that is associated with it. Sadly, with a lot of people, soon and never are the same word and they don't realize the impact it has for them to say "see you soon" and then never see that person again. Really loving your work Lola. Keep it up.

[Shannon]

Really like the simplicity...
I get tripped up on "they" and wonder, even if the grammar is not perfect, if it could be removed entirely? I hope it is not too forward to make such a suggestion.

[Lola]

thank you! I changed it up a bit, do you think it's better now?

[Shannon]

So much smoother to my ear! And the meaning is maintained.

[Lola]

I like it so much more now myself, thank you for your review! :)

[Shannon]

I really appreciate that you considered my suggestion. I am always a little worried to make such comments!

[Lola]

No I'm glad you did!