Twisted

A dark poem. Well I could just say "a poem" because I only really write dark ones 0_0.

How does it work, this love thing?

I have seen it in movies, read about it in books

Aren't boys supposed to enjoy this?

Kissing? Touching?

So why are you crying?

I want to love you

I really do

But why do you insist on fighting me?

You never say "I love you"

All you do is sob

Darling please stop crying!

This time it wont hurt

Just lie still

Just kiss me back

You stupid boy!

You cannot love!

You heart is so twisted

I gave you all

And all you ever did was beg me to leave you alone

But oh well

You will never reject another poor girl again

And I have found another boy

To make my own

To hold and kiss and touch

And maybe he will like it

Maybe he will love me to

Author's Note

Wow, that was disturbing

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Love has a strange affect on everyone, whether they're used to it or not. Some have a difficult time accepting that others feelings are real, so they feel it best to push them away...to me, love is real when both parties try to stick it out, through anything, good and bad days...it shouldn't matter if they look a certain way, if they're your 'type' or not..if they care, they will show it...for others, it will take time for love to let them open up their hearts. You just have to be patient with those who are fragile.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

That's a different way to look at it! Thanks!

[Bluefire]

What brought me in was the dark poem comment, and what put a smile on my face at the end was the "wow,that was disturbing" comment.
Nice poem,
Suggestion though: at the very end, that "to" should be a "too"
Anyway, well played!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Ha, thank you very much!

[Bluefire]

No problem

[Alucard6336]

Valkyie warrior, huh. Well, as my lore is sufficient I know their was honor and light in all of their hearts. But heck, what would I know? I've officially walked through a hurricane, and successfully completed nanowrimo twice.

But still, this poem? Is it personal? I'm not going to give you cheap words, but I will give you many lol.

I like the flow but I still see a blank canvas, the one inside of you.

But the way this looks on paper, it's amazing! You are honorable whether your nature is dark or light! And you know, we should be friends, maybe I could work on that canvas. Great job :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you very much

[emme33]

This is so beautiful! I love the story it tells: "So why are you crying? Darling please stop crying!" This is really inspirational to me! Great work :))

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you!