I promise

I promise darling. This time I will keep it.

I promise darling this time I wont hurt you

I promise darling this time I will not get angry

What are you doing stupid boy

Stop crying

Relax, this time darling I promise not to break you

How could I do this to you again

This time darling

This time

I promise

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem. I played both parts. Giver and receiver. Love is a gift and can be very painful. Words can destroy a world. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Stay strong girl

[underthemask]

This reminds me of my ex. What was sad was every promise he made he meant at that time but he couldnt keep them. He didnt know how.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I am glad you could relate. Well actually no, I guess relating is a bad thing in this case. But thanks for the review

[underthemask]

It's always good to know you're not alone so I am glad that I could relate. I like the poem along. I think it's a good expression for those who can't relate so that maybe they can understand still. At least be aware that these relationships exists. There is such a power with words. I'll keep reading what you wright.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Well that's a great way of looking at it! Thank you for the kind review!

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This time my darling you touch of great beauty and simply to open hearts. Magic is at your hands and soul. GREAT.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow thank you heaps!!

[Justin]

every well done :) :) u were able to talk about things that happen in relationships and what many ppl go through when they are in them :) :) amazing job :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow, thanks a lot!!

[Justin]

your welcome :) :) :) u did an amazing job

[Valkyrie Warrior]

:)!!!!!!!!!

[Justin]

u are amazing writer :) :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Man! And you are an amazing friend, so there!

[Justin]

:) :) : thanks :) :)