Snap

Just a dark poem

Fingers in your hair

Hands under your chin

Flick of the wrist

Snap

White chalk line

Notepads

Photo's being taking

Snap

Funeral procession

Final goodbye's

Coffin lid closing

Snap

 RUNNER UP HUH, YOU WERE SO CLOSE! 

Jul 21, 2015

• FEAR theme, Short Poem
• Snap

Author's Note

I was bored

Reviews

[klawrites]

Very cool piece, I enjoyed it! :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you very much!

[Sami Khalil]

The progression of snapshots in life in different stages and states. An excellent poem...:)..............

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you so much!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. .....:).....

[jeannemarie coulter]

excellent snapshot of death in an instant of time

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thanks a lot

[PoeticChico]

I agree it's so simple yet petrifying.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you!

[Eagle Cruagh]

Snap was about all there is to this one, but
in it`s brevity and simplicity you have created
something new.
---- Eagle Cruagh

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you I think.....

[vido.]

An interesting read in it's simplicity. "Flick of the wrist" as if so effortless. Great piece.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you!!!