Blistering touch

Your kisses burn into my skin

A love, a hate so powerful

Your memory was craved into my heart

With fingers that clawed at my skin

Your words leave blisters in my mouth

Your tears leave salt on my cheeks

I cry for you

I beg you to go

When you plead "stop!" I must go on

When I cry "more!" you shrink away

You love feeds my heart, and steals my soul

My words rub salt in your wounds, while my fingers wipe away your tears

I hate to love you

You love to hate me

Painful love I all this can ever be

 

 

Author's Note

I haven't posted for awhile ;)

Reviews

[Dani The Unreviewed]

It is dark...love, hate. Two emotions that don't blend too well in a persons heart. But they certainly do here. It is awesome. Love it. 100 points.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Oh i am flattered, thank you so much!!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Sure thing :)

[Mathew Jennings]

Nice. I dislike poetry without hurt for some reason. This piece conveyed harsh emotions and a sense of helplessness for me. Well written and I think it's structured well.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thanks for the kind review!

[Eagle Cruagh]

With fingers that clawed at my skin
I hate to love you
You love to hate me.
Many of the above phrases could stand alone.
The reader can only hope that you solve the problem.
Suggest that you just make some new friends.

Your writing is superb, it is the relationship that remains
slightly odorous.

Again---- Make new friends.
Thanks for the wright.
----- Eagle Cruagh

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you very much Eagle! I am very flattered!!

[Eagle Cruagh]

I have been an admirer for ages. I only wishes you the best.
----Eagle

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Ahh thank you~!!!!

[closed]

good poem
it conveys the fraile line between love and hate well

-Dream

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you Dream!!