I miss you

I miss you

A Poem by Valkyrie Warrior
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I miss you, acrostic

"

I loved you

 

My heart is still with you

I can never forget you

So if you loved my, why did you leave

Speak to me, and not just in my dreams

 

You said forever

Our love was all that kept me sane

Underneath my hard shell, I am dying

© 2015 Valkyrie Warrior


Author's Note

Valkyrie Warrior
I have no idea, just thought I would write more acrostics

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This reminds me of a line from forever by Ben Harper
Forever always seems
to be around when it begins
but forever never seems
to be around when it ends

I think it shows your depth and talent as a writer. Very good

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

You are too kind! thank you for all the reviews!!!
Your form and flow is so beautiful, yet painfully unveiling. I have known this depth of missing another, and wondering how everything fell apart; wondering if forever really exists. Powerful acrostic. xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Wow thank you for the wonderful review Eros!!!!!!!
Echoes of Eros

9 Years Ago

Thank YOU for something wonderful to read on a Friday night! :)
Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Oh shucks...........
Missing love in life is the most hardest part of life. You write very nice acrostics...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Oh, thank you very much!
Writer at last! Sky ~

9 Years Ago

Welcome friend!
This is so beautiful, it is trapped in my head, I wish it'd stay forever.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Wow thank you so very much!!!
Thesecuts

9 Years Ago

no problem.

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Added on May 5, 2015
Last Updated on July 7, 2015
Tags: acrostic, love, sadness, longing

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Vallhallah , My mind



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