Embrace me dark lover

Embrace me dark lover for I can never avoid you....

Embrace me dark lover for I cannot avoid you

I pray for you dark lover

your deathly touch, your dark desire

I wait in patient surrender for you to relieve my suffering

You dark and deathly face, your magnetic, drawing touch

For when I fall into your arms my pain will be over

And when you hold me to your chest

I will live no longer

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

For a contest

Reviews

[closed]

very kool piece
with such a caliber of romanticism i take it you won?

amazing job with it

-Dream

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you very much Dream for ALL your reviews!!!!

[closed]

youre welcome
i'll be checking out more

[Valkyrie Warrior]

:-D..............

[Echoes of Eros]

You make this darkness seem so sensual and peaceful, as if death was coming to wipe away all pain and fear from your beautiful soul. This embrace does feel so perfectly intoxicating. xo

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow! Your review is more beautiful than the poem it's self!!! Thank you Eros!!!!

[ANTO]

Death as a relief - the ultimate anti-hero Bb. Very well penned. I like the calmness that is communicated at the end. Is the contest over - how did you fare?

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you for your kind words Anto! T tell you the truth it didn't even make a placing in the contest :S

[ANTO]

Ah well...it placed with me.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Very good piece of work...

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you!!

[alf]

Hi Beautifullybroken. I am at last catching up on the poems I have missed recently. This is indeed a deep dark write. Beautifully crafted and with such emotion. It was a joy to read, alf

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow thank you very much!!