Beau's end

Proper goodbye, the end in Beau's voice. This will not make sense if you haven't read Proper Goodbye.

The cold steel snapped across my wrists

  I moan and she whispers "you owe my sugar, lie still and be a good boy"

    I close my eyes as she removes my shirt, I do owe her

      "it's your fault I am dead" she hisses "isn't it sugar?"

          I nod with my eyes still closed, I know she is right, but still I am scared

She runs her cold hands across my bare chest,

scrapping her nails down my belly as she undoes my fly

"you die tonight little boy" she hisses in my ear

"but don't worry, after tonight, we will be together forever"

my pants and underwear come off and I hear her deathly moan

"I love you sugar!" she finally cries as she reaches the height of her peak

she draws her dagger and drives it deep within my chest

I know we will be together forever now

"come one sugar" she purrs "lets go to the park" 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Beau's end

Reviews

[Zac]

It is a very great composition

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you!!!!

[Zac]

Your welcome.

[Angad Waraich]

Its a really good stand alone piece.
I haven't read the story but the poem conveys a story of its own, i don't know there is something about the way you write that creates an aura that i really enjoy.

Well done.

Thank You.
Angad

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you so much for that kind review!

[alf]

Hi Beautifullybroken. I haven't read Proper Goodbye, but this poem stands alone, although there may be deeper messages inside. Second line . . . You owe my (me) sugar. Incorrect word?? Fourth line . . . isn't (it) sugar. A word missed?? Otherwise a really great read, alf

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you for the constructive review alf.

[Moonie]

I really liked this authentic concept of showing love that goes beyond death. I haven't read "Proper goodbye", but I reckon I got the main theme here. :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice closure to the story. Finding death to be with his love. I like the story and the poem. Thank you for sharing the story and the poetry.
Coyote

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow thank you so much for all your reviews, Coyote, I really appreciate them!!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I enjoyed the poem.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

:-D.......................

[AaronFreitas]

Damn thats an obsessive crazy kind of love haha.... very good job. I love dark pieces and you did it well.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you so much!!! Did you read Proper Goodbye?

[AaronFreitas]

I don't believe I did... by you?

[Valkyrie Warrior]

yes it is, the poem will make more sense if you read it I think.

[AaronFreitas]

Got it... I will do

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Cool! Don't forget to leave a review ;)

[AaronFreitas]

I got you :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

:-D....................

[AaronFreitas]

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