Big girl shoes

Inspired by the image

  Your little heart is open

The world whispers your name

  I know that when you take that step

You will never be the same

  Your big brown eyes are wide and clear

Without a shadow

  Of doubt or fear

I will watch when you take that step

  And put on your big girl shoes

You are so sure in yourself

  You know you'll never lose

This world is unforgiving

  So look before you leap

Be careful where you wander

  And watch were you place your feet.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Caught my Attention the Best

Jun 13, 2015

 

• Deep Poetry
• Big girl shoes

 

 

 

 

 

2nd

Jun 11, 2015

 

• Poetry slamT
• Big girl shoes

 

 

 

 

 

  3rd

Apr 14, 2015

 

• Everbody Grows Up
• Big girl shoes

 

 

 

1st place

Apr 9, 2015

 

• March Poetry Contest
• Big girl shoes

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I saw the image and then wrote the poem.

Reviews

[FREE_BIRD]

great work for encouraging girl ... who really feel scared in this cruel world

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you so much!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful photo and good advice.
"This world is unforgiving
So look before you leap
Be careful where you wander
And watch were you place your feet."
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow thank you for reviewing!!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Vita Rose]

Very maternal. As I read I saw an image of my daughter and smiled slightly. Thank you.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I am glad you like it!!

[M.P. Academy]

Very sweet poem. It made me smile.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you very much!

[Roshan Nair]

Very motherly, if i may say so, but that signifies your desire to preserve whats pure and innocent, hoping that it is not lost to the worlds cruel demeanor with those that are pure and truthful. Great work :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you so much for your meaningful review :)

[Lexi Richard]

Very cute and inspiring poem. Could be interpreted in a lot of different ways, and I really like that about it.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you for your review.