BLUE

For Afraa

B beautiful, bouncy, bright.

L lonely, lost, loveless.

U untold story.

E exposed, expired.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1st place

Mar 10, 2015

 

• National Acrostic Poetry Day!
• BLUE

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I tried to tell a story, if anyone picks up on it, please tell me your opinions if you find the story :)

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Very creative and cool! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thanks!!!!!!

[Sindu]

I love this! Pithy and pretty! I think I can see a story but my thoughts are so jumbled that it's hard to explain it straight. It's like different shades of blue dance on the canvas and slowly fade into black nothing with the end. From bright to sad to the story within and it unfolds, exposes and ends everything with it into only black. Idk if it made sense to you :D

[Valkyrie Warrior]

it made perfect sense! Thank you for the meaningful review :)

[Sindu]

Yw... :) ..

[DoormanDan]

The words you chose for this poem are all perfect and really keep the flow consistent. This is a very good acrostic poem! :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you very much!

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good use of words. Create thoughts and visions using the minimum amount of words. This is hard to do. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow thank you!!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

:-D....................

[Roshan Nair]

Lol I see the Afraa challenge has reached here too :)
Sweet piece and a great acrostic
Keep goin :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you!

[Emily]

I like how simple it is!
Short and sweet!
Keep it up!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you very much!

[Marie]

I understand the story. That's a nice acrostic.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Cool I am glad : ) Thank you for reviewing

[Afraa]

Damn, this is all kinds of beautiful! Although you worked through it fast, it came out amazing! Wow, I applaud you for this, Lorna. This is definitely going on my favorites. Thank you for participating!!!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I am glad you reviewed it and liked. Did you find the story in it?

[Afraa]

Forgive me... I have read this over fifty times, and can't seem to figure it out. When I think of the color blue, the sky and ocean comes to mind... but I don't think you were talking about either of those.

Uhhh... blue eyes???

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Never mind :)