Dear Delilah #1

June 3rd 1898

Dear Delilah

How sweet your name does look on parchment but sweeter still spoken from my lips. I cannot begin to tell you in words the extend of my sorrow and loneliness without you here. My father says it will get better but I don't think it ever shall. My life at the manor is horrible and I can hardly focus on my lectures with thoughts of you haunting my mind. The other men here are terrible snobs who just can't seem to find it in their hearts to be civil to me. Father is still blustering on, as usual, about how I should pay more attention to my study but I just can't Delilah, I just can't. The world seems to dim without your shining face to lighten it. I wish I could be back at the hall with you, under the walnut tree, speaking like lover should. I have drawn you a picture of one of my professors as I know how my drawings amused you.

 

 

 

This is my professor Qwite, Dan Qwite, I believe.

Oh my darling how I miss you, my world has never seemed so bleak.

Yours forever and sincerely

William Morrow.

 

 

 

 

 

2nd

Dec 23, 2014

 

• Letter to Lost Love
• Dear Delilah #1

 

 

 

6th place

Dec 26, 2014

 

• Anything!
• Dear Delilah #1

 

 

 

 

9th place

Mar 1, 2015

 

• Love
• Dear Delilah #1

 Good Book 

Jul 8, 2015

• BOOKS!!!
• Letters to a lover

 

 

 

Honorable Mention

Jul 9, 2015

 

• Romance!
• Letters to a lover

 

 

 

Author's Note

Check tomorrow for Delilah's reply ;)

Reviews

[Lola_Bee]

Beautiful connotation, short sweet and leaves an everlasting impression. It make me want to read more. Lovely, keep it up, I’m on to Delilah now. there are very tiny grammatical errors (I only bring this up for constructive feedback) but one can mislook that easily for such enchanting writing.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you so much for your review and kind word! it means a lot to me.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Ohhh! It was so nice! This makes me happy!
Great job!
Keep on writing!

C. Lee Battaglia

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you!!!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

:) Your welcome!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

:D!!!!!!!!!!

[Ravenwing]

The word choice was picked nicely, definitely eloquent. Despite a few grammatical errors (such as in need of some commas), I look forward to see where this story leads. Did you draw the sketch? Excellent work on that too if so. :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you so much :)

[Ravenwing]

No problemo! ^-^

[Valkyrie Warrior]

:D!!!!!!!!!!

[Tasfia Islam]

Wow......this is such a great piece....I'm dying to read forward

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I am so glad you like it!!!!! Thank you for reviewing :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This really is a beautiful and deep piece. You can feel the sadness in his tone. That is what made it an amazing read. Thank you for sharing. :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I am so glad you like it, thank you for the kind review

[Angie Diane♥♥]

You are very welcome :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

:D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Cameron Griffith]

Wow! Reminds me of the movie Her, such a well written piece, you should enter it into the Letter to Lost Love contest! Excited to read Delilah's reply!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow thank you for your kind words :)

[Layi Tate]

I absolutely loved reading this the descriptiveness of the sadness in his voice from missing what seems to be his love is just so heart warming and connects to you on the inside on a totally different spiritual level of longing for the departed

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I am so glad you like it!!! Thank you so much for the review!

[Syreeta]

omg! i love this! its deep and i can feel all the emotions!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you, I am glad you like it :)

[Afraa]

"How sweet your name does look on parchment"

My favorite line!

[Afraa]

Lorna, how ever did you come up with this? Very sweet indeed. I love it.

Can I just say something? It kills me that you write the most cutest things, but they're very short. Agh! Please I demand more.

I hate being served small portions of something good. Haha!

Keep writing, girl.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you so much!!!! Well like I said check tomorrow for Delilah's reply ;) And again thank you for taking the time to review :)

[Afraa]

And what if I can't wait until tomorrow? Haha! Kidding...

Your very welcome, Lorna.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

:) Are you going to read it tomorrow?

[Afraa]

Of course I am. This is Lorna's work we're talking about. :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow that is literally one of the sweetest things anyone has ever said to me! Thank you! You just made my day!

[Afraa]

Whoa, that made me a little upset to hear that, Lorna. What kind of world do you live in???
read moreWhoa, that made me a little upset to hear that, Lorna. What kind of world do you live in???

Believe me, I am happy to hear that I made your day.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Well it's not full of people as nice as you that's for sure. Hey guess what????????

[Afraa]

Okay now you made my night! Thank you, Lorna! And what is up?

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Well that's good now we have are both happy :). I am about to write Delilah's reply.

[Afraa]

Sorry for the late replies. Working on a poem. :)

Really?! I am excited, but I will most likely fall asleep before you're done. :P Haha!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I am done!!!!!