The last

I guess this is it

This is the last thing I will ever say

 

Today is to be my last day

 

Never again to come home to this place

 

Never again to see your beautiful face

 

Oh your face

 

It swims in my mind

 

Bruised and broken

 

The only image I can find

 

I hate myself for what I've done

 

And now there's nowhere to run

 

So this is the last

 

The last

 

Your death is in the past

 

See you soon my love

 

As I find my final resting place above

 

 

 

 

 

2nd Place Outstanding Work

Apr 9, 2015

 

• Poems about Heartache
• The last

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Whatever just happened I take full responsibility, sorry :S.

Reviews

[hannah]

oh, what a beautiful poem!
it is filled with emotions and expression
i look forward to reading more of your work c:

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I am so glad you like it :)

[Laura3841]

I love your poems. They make me excited to read your stories!! If I can ever get on this site when I'm not at work, I would love to delve in! :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you so much!

[Laura3841]

You're welcome!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

:D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Tasfia Islam]

Did u got a noble prize? Seriously, I'm kinda becoming ur fan.... :D

[Valkyrie Warrior]

wow you are seriously making me feel great, thank you!!!!!!!!!!

[Tasfia Islam]

Oh really? then this is great to make a great poet feel great....haha

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thanks again :)

[Arsh]

Here you expresses the shine of your lovable heart... in words. Liked it! Your emotions & the way of sweetness`s being appreciated by your readers. Keep writing! ;)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you so much, you are to kind :).

[Arsh]

Your welcome. Oh.. am I? Well, thanks... yeah, now i`m feeling that i`m very kind ;)
Haha! ;)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

:-)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Konigin]

Woah...

This is... deep... and full of rolling emotions
It made me gasp and wonder what happened... I was engulfed in the world you created...

WOWZA Lorna! Superb pen!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow I am so glad you like it!!!

[Konigin]

I LOVED IT!!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I am so glad!!!!!!

[Afraa]

Lorna, I think you may have beaten my record for depressing poems. O_o

Overall, I loved it.

By the way, your Author's Notes never cease to crack me up! Haha! :'D

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Well I am so glad you liked it thank you so much for the review!!!

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

This is a terribly sad poem! There is a profound sense of guilt shining through.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you I will take that as a complement :)