Fire eyes

The first time I saw fire in your eyes I was enchanted. You were dangerous I knew that but I didn't care. You were the most beautiful creature I had ever seen and I needed to have you. You were so strong and I was so young it was just to hard to resist. Your love hurt, oh yes it hurt but I didn't mind. But one day it just got too much. I screamed but it was to late. I was drifting away looking down on the sorry scene below. You held me and wept. You cried you were sorry, begged me to stay. But I was long gone.

Maybe I was just too young and maybe you were just too strong.

I miss you, my beautiful creature.

   

Author's Note

I am not sure what just happened......

Reviews

[DeliBlue]

Yeah I get it and I like it

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I am glad you like it. Thank you for the review.

[EyeAmAlive]

Beautiful. Nothing else that I can say

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow thank you!

[EyeAmAlive]

Your welcome! 😃

[Valkyrie Warrior]

:))))))...............

[Afraa]

Haha! You were having a moment there, Lor!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I guess I was, just messing around

[Afraa]

Do you plan to continue with it?
By the way, I really liked your other story. The one of that wet man walking into the bar.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I am not sure how I can continue. If you would like to hear more maybe we could co-write?
I am glad you like my other story that one I will continue :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Maybe we could do a prequel?

[Afraa]

I will message you when I can. :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Ok cool. Here is my email maybe we could email each other
[email protected]