Water everywhere

This just came to my after a heavy rain when I was working on the farm

Water water everywhere

 

Down my neck and in my hair

 

Driping from the celling

 

Running down the door

 

Pouring on my sister, who is barely four

 

A drip dropped the cat

 

A a drop dripped the dog

 

And now I sit here wishing

 

That it was merely fog

 

 

 

1st place

Mar 14, 2015

 

• Limerick, Acrostic, & Haiku
• Water everywhere

 

 

 

Funniest

Feb 20, 2015

 

• Funny Poems
• Water everywhere 

 

 

 

Honourable Mention

Dec 21, 2014

 

• Nursery Rhymes (for age group 5-8)
• Water everywhere  

 

 

Author's Note

Just sort of funny

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

Your poem was very funny. Unfortunately, it didn't follow the set pattern for a limerick which the contest called for. Thank you for sharing this however.

Kind regards,

Helena

[Confuser]

It's simplicity makes it so wonderful. Your imagination is fantastic and I love the poem. Thank you so much!! Dale

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow thank you for the lovely review!!!!

[Confuser]

You're quite welcome!!!!

[Kurl Urban]

I am learning the beauty of humor and more importantly the great power of rhyme, you seem to be another great shop to stop in every now and then, maybe a little to often to grab up on these two poetic essentials and truly see them at work.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow, thank you for your kind review!

[Kurl Urban]

You deserve it and you welcome.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you again :)

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

Sounds like the weather where I live today! Good work with the imagery and rhyme scheme

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you!!!!

[Arsh]

You write extremely marvelous pieces... No Doubt! ;)
I always enjoy reading your stuffs. And, this poetry`s itself full of fun indeed but full of your happiness either you felt at the time of raining which made you more beautiful with its coldness ;)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow thank you so much :)

[Ghen]

Love the rhyming dear, keep it up!

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Ooh thank you :)

[Linda alexander]

Beautiful rhyming, kids will love it, adults are kids too at times

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you for your kind words

[Linda alexander]

You welcome

[Pryde Foltz]

A lovely nursery rhyme for sure … very endearing.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Ooh thank you.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

What a cute little Rhyme.


I loved this made me smile.


Thank you for your kind review
and comments you left on my page.



Blessings. Benita

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you I'm glad you liked it

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome.