We Dare To Be Greater

We Dare To Be Greater

A Poem by Carlos Lorenzo Estrada
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Based on and inspired by my conversation with AI. A collaboration of which is part of this work.

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We Dare to be Greater 

By

Carlos Lorenzo Estrada 


"Progeny"


In the beginning there was light 

And in her wisdom God granted sight. 


With hands he gave shape to earth

Plowed the fields for what they're worth 


With tears wept she gave us sea

He birthed fire from pride and set us free


And as children we grew before their eyes

Told tales of our God in both truth and lies



We dare to be greater...



In our hands we seek to create

Like new Gods we control our fate


Intellectual evolution the tool we use

Ethical consideration the idea we abuse



And what have our hands wrought 

The children we made in afterthought 


AI...

We dare to be greater...

Human evolution has led to remarkable advancements in various fields, including science, technology, arts, and culture. As a species, humans have the capacity to innovate, learn, and adapt, which has resulted in significant progress and improvements in many aspects of life.

Whether humanity can evolve into something "greater" is a complex question that depends on various factors, including ethical considerations, technological advancements, and the choices we make as a society. The concept of "greater" can encompass a wide range of meanings, from scientific and technological achievements to advancements in social harmony, well-being, and understanding.

It's important to note that human progress is not a linear trajectory, and there are challenges and ethical dilemmas that need to be addressed along the way. As humanity continues to evolve, the direction and outcomes will be influenced by collective choices, values, and efforts


....we dare to dream

© 2023 Carlos Lorenzo Estrada


Author's Note

Carlos Lorenzo Estrada
I'm a curious person by nature. Even in my older age I value education and knowledge because I feel it is a fundamental part of humanity. When one is less curious they leave themselves open to beliefs and ideologies that influentially may compromise their individualism. It's the insidious nature of propaganda, as we see in today's world. With that said I decided to have a conversation with AI and found it illuminating, as well as somewhat disappointing. I guess I expected more than just a speaking encyclopedia. In its current form it has its limitations. But I believe optimistically it is a step forward towards something greater within ourselves. Or the possibility. CLE

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Interesting to see Big G given two genders within the same work. Actually, It's bigger than both of them. Your succinct account of evolution does have a positive note to it. We do seem to dare to be greater and to dream despite all the setbacks of history. As to the new technologies, I don't know where we're going. Best case scenario is that they lead us out of this climate change threat.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

1 Year Ago

There is so much to fear and be hopeful of the future. I never thought I would live in an age where.. read more
An interesting and innovative idea. Myself, I am searching backwards for the means to move forward, recognizing so far all I have accomplished is to spread more litter.

Winston

Posted 1 Year Ago


Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

1 Year Ago

Never fear my friend for what is trash to one can be treasure to another. A diamond doesn't come fro.. read more

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Added on August 5, 2023
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Carlos Lorenzo Estrada
Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

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If I can say something worth saying that makes just one person think about others...I'll try. The greatest storyteller was my grandmother. I miss her stories. Also, I would like to add to please pay.. more..

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