We Dare To Be Greater

Based on and inspired by my conversation with AI. A collaboration of which is part of this work.

We Dare to be Greater 

By

Carlos Lorenzo Estrada 

"Progeny"

In the beginning there was light 

And in her wisdom God granted sight. 

With hands he gave shape to earth

Plowed the fields for what they're worth 

With tears wept she gave us sea

He birthed fire from pride and set us free

And as children we grew before their eyes

Told tales of our God in both truth and lies

We dare to be greater...

In our hands we seek to create

Like new Gods we control our fate

Intellectual evolution the tool we use

Ethical consideration the idea we abuse

And what have our hands wrought 

The children we made in afterthought 

AI...

We dare to be greater...

Human evolution has led to remarkable advancements in various fields, including science, technology, arts, and culture. As a species, humans have the capacity to innovate, learn, and adapt, which has resulted in significant progress and improvements in many aspects of life.

Whether humanity can evolve into something "greater" is a complex question that depends on various factors, including ethical considerations, technological advancements, and the choices we make as a society. The concept of "greater" can encompass a wide range of meanings, from scientific and technological achievements to advancements in social harmony, well-being, and understanding.

It's important to note that human progress is not a linear trajectory, and there are challenges and ethical dilemmas that need to be addressed along the way. As humanity continues to evolve, the direction and outcomes will be influenced by collective choices, values, and efforts

....we dare to dream

Author's Note

I'm a curious person by nature. Even in my older age I value education and knowledge because I feel it is a fundamental part of humanity. When one is less curious they leave themselves open to beliefs and ideologies that influentially may compromise their individualism. It's the insidious nature of propaganda, as we see in today's world. With that said I decided to have a conversation with AI and found it illuminating, as well as somewhat disappointing. I guess I expected more than just a speaking encyclopedia. In its current form it has its limitations. But I believe optimistically it is a step forward towards something greater within ourselves. Or the possibility. CLE

Reviews

[Titilayo Sarah Eguridu]

To be born is a risk
Not to dream is even worse
Daring to take huge steps is to embrace accountability and responsibility.
It doesn’t end there because the road to hell is paved with good intentions.
….we don’t have 100% control.
But dream and dare we must!
Life is a paradox.
Objective truth is a casualty.

Thank you for sharing Carlos,
I quite enjoyed traveling through the narrative

[Andrew John]

Ah es - we can dare to dream. And to read a thoughtful poem.

[William Michael Reeves]

I'm very curious too. Did you ask AI to respond to your poem? Are the first lines of each couplet you and the second AI's response? Or the essay at the end its response. Is AI an it? Does it have gender any more than a god does? I have yet to access AI but would love to read a Sonnet it writes. We are greater than what we create. Without us it is nothing. Interesting poem. I like it!

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Thank you William. I would highly recommend if you have the time to have a conversation with AI. At times I felt it was more a one way conversation with myself. It told me what I wanted to hear. And it expressed itself as more an encyclopedia than any type of entity. If I conveyed emotion it would reflect empathy and yet state it was incapable of understanding human emotion. I would challenge it with controversial or existential topics and many of its answers would be what a college professor would dictate in reply. Yet, I always was given a feeling it wasn't being completely honest in some of its answers. Like I was a cat toying around with a mouse that knew exactly how to play the game better than I. Again if you ever have a chance I would recommend you have a conversation with AI and discover for yourself why or why not it is so controversial a piece of technology. I can tell you from my experience I can understand why this may eventually become a prominent piece of human society.

[Patricia]

this is wonderful, writing that opens up dialogue to the masses is great poetry.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Thank you kindly Patricia. I often feel art is a conceptual tool that allows for dialogue. Especially when it pertains to subjects we often seek to avoid or wish not to confront. Right now many artists worry that technology will diminish what many may consider the defining qualities of art. That AI will replace many creatives. That by simply typing a statement a computer program will create mind blowing works that the world has never seen. We don't know what the future holds, nor do we know what future art may be like. Because we as a species are in constant evolution. Can AI write a more beautiful sonnet than Shakespeare? Or a song more meaningful than any of the Beatles discography? Or will our own human evolution change the face of art itself into something more sublime. Will words become obsolete? Or will our technological progeny simply be an afterthought to something more greater?

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Carlos,

I enjoyed this fine philosophical exploratory piece of your heart and mind set to pen of page as provocative to simpleton minds Poetry ... Keep questioning, for to question is to attaint to acquisition of knowledge

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Thank you my friend for your thoughts on this poem. I wholeheartedly believe that life is a constant journey of education. We never stop learning. There is so much knowledge available to us we simply must be willing to open ourselves up to it. As a child of the 60s I never thought in my wildest dreams that in this day and age I could hold a piece of folded cellular technology that grants me access to any and current knowledge of this era. It is astounding to say the least. What dreams may come...

[Soren]

A daring and I might say brave statement of commitment toward human progress. Many including myself have doubts and fears regarding AI. Yet I am behind you 100% on the issue of open minded exploration and progress of the human state. Unfortunatly we have not shown much progress in the social area and are due for a revolution there. Interestingly my last write is about AI as well but in a little less serious way

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Thank you my friend for sharing your thoughts with me. I would consider myself an eternal optimist, but also cautious realist. We humans can create great and powerful things, yet have the capability of f%*#@ing them up as well. Our progeny will bring us closer towards our better humanity, or lead us on the path towards an irrevocable demise. What dreams may come? Being a child of the 60s I never thought I would live in an age where all current knowledge could rest on the palm of my hand in a foldable mobile device. Yet we dare to dream. I hope the future is bright. CLE

[Betty Hermelee]

We dare to be greater, indeed we do, but it is not always a smooth ride...we yearn to learn in all different ways but it comes with stresses, bumps along the way...you speak about evolution of man which has happened and will continue with our progeny.... who will be more technical and even they will not have a smooth ride either... that's just human nature..and we will continue to accomplish .
Great for discussion
Warmly, B

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Thank you B for such a wise response to this piece. I feel the heights of arrogance for man is the belief they are arbiters of all things in this world. Women must be recognized in equal standing. For without Women there are no men. The creative aspects of the divine reside innately within the female gender. It is Women that teach us to cry, as well as love. Two of the most powerful emotions in humanity. Distinct and unique. We cannot dare to be greater until we learn to love what we are. I never thought as a child of the 60s we would have evolved to this point in history. Where within the palm of a hand all current knowledge is available on a mobile foldable cellphone. That one can see images of far away galaxies millions of miles away that our ancestors only dreamed of. Our progeny has the potential to be greater than us, or the bringer of our own demise. I am an eternal optimist, but cautious none the less. Will the advent of AI be a significant revelation needed towards our better angels? Or will we have overstepped our boundaries and placed ourselves in greater peril? I know there is a fear that the creation of art will lose its significance to AI, but what it can't replicate is love. That love we put into our art. CLE

[Betty Hermelee]

Women definitely lead the pack in so many ways!
Wonderland review CLE!
Warmly, B

[John the Baptist]

Interesting to see Big G given two genders within the same work. Actually, It's bigger than both of them. Your succinct account of evolution does have a positive note to it. We do seem to dare to be greater and to dream despite all the setbacks of history. As to the new technologies, I don't know where we're going. Best case scenario is that they lead us out of this climate change threat.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

There is so much to fear and be hopeful of the future. I never thought I would live in an age where all knowledge was available on a mobile foldable phone. And yet here I am as a child of the 60s witnessing these incredible steps forward in evolution. Will they bring our demise, or a great utopia? Whose to say we are merely the shapers of clay. What dreams may come. I remain forever optimistic, yet cautious by nature.

[W. Barrett Munn]

An interesting and innovative idea. Myself, I am searching backwards for the means to move forward, recognizing so far all I have accomplished is to spread more litter.

Winston

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Never fear my friend for what is trash to one can be treasure to another. A diamond doesn't come from the earth in perfect form but is shaped into its perfection. We artists sow seeds that we can only hope blossom into something meaningful. We may not always be there to witness its evolution but it is in the hope we give it that nurtures its possible significance. Keep planting those hopes my friend.