The profound Wisdom of a Fortune Cookie

The profound Wisdom of a Fortune Cookie

A Poem by Carlos Lorenzo Estrada
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This Senryu speaks to the misinformation which plagues societies as we speak. It is incumbent on us to educate ourselves from this vile disease of lies. That is our only cure.

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The Profound Wisdom of a Fortune Cookie

By


Carlos Lorenzo Estrada 


"A truth that's told with bad intent beats all the lies you can invent." -William Blake


Truth is absolute

Perspective is biased thought

Alternative lies...

© 2021 Carlos Lorenzo Estrada


Author's Note

Carlos Lorenzo Estrada
I wrote this after eating at Panda Express and cracking open a fortune cookie after. Now, I know that Panda Express really isn't considered authentic Chinese Food, but hey, it's like two blocks away from my place and I'm too damn lazy to drive further into the city. The actual message in the fortune cookie was a bit disappointing. Something about achieving great wealth soon...Yada, Yada, Yada. So I thought about why not a clever quip on alternative facts. And so once more birthed from my mind uterus I give you this senryu made from love, hope, and a bit of Panda Express. PS, on a side note due to some of the recent trolling on the website I decided to remove the rating from my submissions moving forward. Thank you for reading and any discussion of this poem is welcomed.

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Well, I hate the taste of fortune cookies and the fortunes told within are simplistic at best. You would probably get the same advice from a crooked fortune teller. At least the Chinese meal was nice! So thumbs up for that! 💛

Posted 3 Years Ago


Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Marina, for your comment. For once I would like to open up a fortune cookie and read trut.. read more
What's that great saying. '' THE TRUTH IS PROTECTED BY A BODYGUARD OF LIES.''
I'm with the fortune cookie, the waitress smiled when she gave it to me.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Paul, for your insightful comment on truth. I wish the world was filled with fortune coo.. read more
Hello, Carlos! :)
I agree with your first line, truth is absolutely in the eye of the beholder. I mean, it really speaks to me on a spiritual level. :p
I watched the Conway hag spew. She has a way with morons.
I'm a troll on Facebook, sort of. I used to go to the fox News page, and on every posting, I'd comment, "Impeach the orange". It was fun. Now, I'm in a group called Science Humour, and whenever I like a post there, I comment, "How is this science humor?", and they stomp on me. Its a lot of fun. There are a lot of frustrated people out there; which I think may be partially due to sodium intake.
Its weird how we sometimes see what we want to see. Maybe focus gives something like momentum to our thoughts, and lack of focus is just our thoughts carrying on without us. I do feel mindless sometimes. Sometimes, I'll read something, then go back, and the words are a bit different than I remember.


Posted 3 Years Ago


Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

3 Years Ago

Exactly my point, Matt. Truth is undeniable but belief malleable. Because we are fallible, imperfe.. read more
mattavelli

3 Years Ago

Pervert...
Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

3 Years Ago

From you, I shall wear it as a badge of honor hahaha. Thank you my friend.
Perspective is not just how we look at things, but placing ourselves in the other perspectives shoes, feeling and being without judgement. If we need to judge after that, then maybe we were in the wrong shoes all along.
An excellent use of shorter form poetry to say more than the sum of its parts.

Posted 3 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If you wonder what wonder is are you duplicitous

Posted 3 Years Ago


Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

3 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and commenting on this work, Kent. Now your question would make a very good S.. read more
I think you can find more truth in one fortune cookie than in a hundred conspiracy theories.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

3 Years Ago

I totally agree with you on this comment. I wish the world was filled with fortune cookies, we woul.. read more

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Carlos Lorenzo Estrada
Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

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