Water

 Water, It shows deep beneath.
    With a clear vision, there's no oxsygen.
    It looks empty but it's solid as a rock.
    It mirrors whats above and copies whats on ground.
    You listen to the crickle and crackle as it flows,
    when it's under the moon light it glistens, when
    it's under the sun it shines, shines so bright it blinds
    the human eye. Separated from the horizon it goes from
    blue to blue, sailing to flying. It covers treasures
     to be found and others a home.
    It rises and sinks but one thing it will always do
    is show itself.

Reviews

[Nisreen]

I really enjoyed this piece
I love your closing line
Being a water sign
I feel water is peace and the ultimate source of strength

Walk by the sea and feel that energy

Thanks for sharing

[PoeticSorcery]

I do love water but it creeps me out as well, when I think about drowning. it's both magically beautiful and dangerously eerie.

[Gray]

I like the spider web looking lines that move in a pool.

I like your description in this.

[lorennn]

Thank you, that is much appreciated.

[guy drori]

The color you chose for this poem emphasizes its' whole essence. Your choice of words was very good. The way you described the water made the water look as so much more than it really is. you practically almost gave it a life of its own. Really glad I read this :)

[lorennn]

Thank you so much!

[guy drori]

Thank you for sharing it ;)

[Sunny]

I really like this one! it's very deep, lol pun-somewhat-intended. lol very nice :)

[lorennn]

Thank you!(: