What If

What if you could feel the heartache  you make me feel,

would you be more caring or maybe even more loving too me?

What if you could see how self centered  you are,

would share more or maybe be more generous?

What if you could see how two faced you are

with me, would you at least try too be more whole?

What if you cried as much as you made me cry,

would you wipe your tears, or would let them fall?

What if I disappeared tomorrow, would you wish

you didn't have made me say goodbye?

  what if, this was your last night with me??

~Loren

Reviews

[Justin]

that was really good, it tells a great story in a short form, i really like it :)

[lorennn]

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

[Sunny]

I like it! A good reason to treat people the way you would want to be treated! :)

[lorennn]

Thank you, i do agree with you!

[Gummy.G]

Nice ending, really sliced the road I thought this was going.

[lorennn]

Thank you! I appreciate you taking time too read it.