cherished

High above where no one can see, there's

a place where you are loved and cherished, no matter

what you've done or who you are. There is somebody out there
who will love you, who will cherish you and who will appreciate
your company. Everybody feels somewhere is their heart, that
they aren't loved or cherished, but above all there's
a greater place, where we all feel that warmth in our heart
that we've been searching in this huge,
crazy world that scientifically spins in circles, and that
sometimes gets us spinning in circles, doing that same thing everyday.
not realizing, that we can change what we do, how we look at things
its all up to us. the choices we make today plays a big roll
in our tomorrow.

~Loren

Reviews

[Justin]

that is really great :) :) :) it tells a great story in a short form :)

[lorennn]

Thank you! (:

[Katharine]

I love how you recognize that we are the ones responsible for what happens in our lives. Most people blame their problems on others, but its mainly their fault. Thank you for this poem! It was simple and true.

[lorennn]

Your welcome!

[Coyote Poetry]

"that we can change what we do, how we look at things
its all up to us. the choices we make today plays a big roll
in our tomorrow."
I agree with your logic. Every decision good or bad. We are responsible for. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[lorennn]

Your welcome!

[Sunny]

Love it girl! Perfect first story!

[lorennn]

Thank you!