-Orginal Sin-

-Orginal Sin-

A Poem by Maximus. R.
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Me Philosophy.

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I'd echoed tenfold of man's first disobedience and devour the fruits of that forbidden tree whose mortal taste begot death into our world. Adieu Eden nevermore regained, what shall immortality harvest men if never to touch, taste, to smell the scent of a woman. I'd echoed tenfold of man's first disobedience to be with you woman.

© 2009 Maximus. R.


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Great poignancy to this piece. You write with an old style.

Truly, what is the point of living if we follow all the rules? Why paradise, if we are too innocent? You can't appreciate the wonder, beauty, and joy, without a good measure of the pain, despair, and darkness. Knowledge let's you understand so much more.

We women are so worth it right? ;)

Posted 15 Years Ago


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nice poem

Posted 16 Years Ago


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You know how to make the mind think but at the same time grip what your saying without hesitation. Very well done and I am pleased to read anything of yours. They seem to be very insightful and mean something. ^^ Keep it up.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And was it not a beautiful sin. Short, yet deep and insightful, nice write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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You have a gift of the use of language to touch others...
This is excellent

Lynda

Posted 16 Years Ago


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what shall immortality harvest men if never to touch, taste, to smell the scent of a woman --- I agree 100%. Women are the bomb!
fruits of that forbidden tree --- YUM.

Good write. Beautifully written, if a trifle 'dominant'.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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