-Orginal Sin-

Me Philosophy.

I'd echoed tenfold of man's first disobedience and devour the fruits of that forbidden tree whose mortal taste begot death into our world. Adieu Eden nevermore regained, what shall immortality harvest men if never to touch, taste, to smell the scent of a woman. I'd echoed tenfold of man's first disobedience to be with you woman.

Reviews

[Shell]

Great poignancy to this piece. You write with an old style.

Truly, what is the point of living if we follow all the rules? Why paradise, if we are too innocent? You can't appreciate the wonder, beauty, and joy, without a good measure of the pain, despair, and darkness. Knowledge let's you understand so much more.

We women are so worth it right? ;)

[jex]

Wow! This is pretty deep. It's short, but has a lot of meaning to it. Nice expanded vocabulary. It's good to see people writing poetry in a unique way such as this

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Good!

Sal

[Almost Alive]

Short, but with a lot of strength, and a deep meaning...
There's just things men have to do to be with their precious one...
And there are also sometimes that you do things for others without thinking them twice, since they're so important to you. I haven't gone so far -yet.

Good job!

[Tai-San]

Really good actually. are you a philosaper? (bad spelling!) this really sounds great.

[Mr Dennis Paquin]

Laughing, very clever. For the scent of a woman we accept our down fall... I am with you on that one!

Smiles
Den

[lAcEy_LoO's Poems Site]

Wow that was really good!!!

[Rhine Wolf]

so smooth, loved it, and who better to sin with but a woman!

Blessed be.
Fallon

[jemajo]

I enjoyed this. Semi-romantic, a little dark, and the last line was great.

[Eagle Cruagh]

Yep !
Not much left to us, having forbidden the most
exquisite things on earth, the taste, touch and
the scent of woman.
My favorite.
---- Eagle Cruagh

[Adela Muresan]

Kowel.
I like it that you didn't use a lot of detail, and kept it short.

A.M.