-Orginal Sin-

Me Philosophy.

I'd echoed tenfold of man's first disobedience and devour the fruits of that forbidden tree whose mortal taste begot death into our world. Adieu Eden nevermore regained, what shall immortality harvest men if never to touch, taste, to smell the scent of a woman. I'd echoed tenfold of man's first disobedience to be with you woman.

Reviews

[Shell]

Great poignancy to this piece. You write with an old style.

Truly, what is the point of living if we follow all the rules? Why paradise, if we are too innocent? You can't appreciate the wonder, beauty, and joy, without a good measure of the pain, despair, and darkness. Knowledge let's you understand so much more.

We women are so worth it right? ;)

[mick weller]

Ged 'em down, pips an' all - no such thing as bad calories...

[Tovli]

nicely done. enjoyed. tovli

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

very nice, you have all the "write" words! x0

[Gandré]

I have read this poem and thought about the Michelangelo Bounarotti fresca in the sixtinian Chappell (not sure how to write in in english).the fight of the soul with flesh pleasures. He created an old or ugly looking adam and eve after they tried the tree of knowledge and realized that the happiness was transient. I am happy your poem took another pointe.
Pretty sweet poem.

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Haha i like this alot!

very cool!

hehe

^_^

[fallendemonofmercy]

this was very telling - maybe this is what adam was thinking and deciding and realizing as he bit into that sweet, sticky fruit

[Sheila Kline]

A beholding message of desire to have that which you desire, and to accept all that is lost in enjoying - the woman with her scent, touch, taste.....sensuously and pleasantly delicious!
I am impressed with the message!
Sheila

[R.S. Wilder]

yummy...

[Destiny]

wow. this is very... well amazing. I'm very glad I decided to have another look at your work. It's very hard to describe the feelings I got from this poem. Passion for sure, a stubbornness, or maybe just a resoluteness.It was very powerfully. I have to go read some more of your work now.
Thanx for writing.
♥Destiny♥