-Misery-

Me Philosophy.

It is as if I'd been blitzed by sorcery my soul drainned of its purity.

Hade's vile hands has hardened my heart, all I have come to love are no longer be, all vanished like the sweet morning dew, devoured away by the hounds of hell.

My devilish soul unable to sustain this perilous emotion called love.

Ah! The sacrifices I've given for the sake of knowledge, but nonetheless I must remain in the company of my demons.

 

Reviews

[Christy]

I love, "Nevertheless, I must remain in the company of my demons." That's a brilliant line and one I'll be using for a while. I'd suggest breaking this into actual poetry form. Split lines make it much easier to read and settle thoughts. I had to read it a few times to grasp everything you were saying since it runs together so. Add punctuation between "blitzed by sorcery" and "my soul drained of its purity" (I'd suggest a semi-colon). "Had" should be "has," for "has hardened." "Are no longer be" is iffy syntax; try something like, "all I have come to love / No longer exists." Add a comma after "knowledge" and you'll be pretty set. This is a great start to what could be a really awesome short piece. Well done!

[Greg Skura]

Very well done! I enjoyed this poem emensely!

[Pester D. Finches]

wonderful, "The sacrifices I've given for the sake of knowledge" perfect line. i like the way it flows. good word choice.

[Katherine Wyatt]

Wonderful! where would we be without the demons we have that are our teachers ..Magnificently dark and a wonderful read!!

[Aekmy]

Spastastically dark.
I love it.
Well done.

[R.S. Wilder]

captivating and darkly intense. Another superb piece.

[Arthur Crow]

Oh this is just so darkly beautiful.. your crimson word-weaving is superb - passionate and strong. Well bled!

[closed]

brilliant. love it completely, simply magnificent!

[Wildecat]

We all have our share of demons, but such is life. Thanks for the friend invite.

[Mr Dennis Paquin]

Next time perhaps you'll get lucky.

Are you sure it is not the company of She-demons? That can turn any mans heart cold. Yet a woman with out a fiery passion is not much of a woman.

A little bit of a soul search, but well written.