Perfect imperfections

You say you're imperfect
You say you not worthy to be in my presence
You say you're scars shame you
You say you need to be thin for me
I do not see the so called imperfections you see
I am the one not worthy of you.
I see you're scars a a story I want to write a happy ending for
I say you need to be you for you
I think you're beautiful
I see you as perfect
You say I am you're prince but you're not a princess
You call me you're brave but I can't hold you safely in my arms
You say you love me but I cant love you
You are all I want and all I need why can't you see?

Reviews

[ReedWrite]

Beautiful.
The plea here is heartfelt, and beautifully penned.
One correction you might want to make, is a couple of places you have 'your', when it should be 'you're', and the second line you have the word presents...and I think you want the word presence...it reads as if it should be presence, anyway.
I am not sure who you wrote this poem for...but she is a lucky woman. It is truly a masterpiece of emotion and flow and intensity. Nice job!

[Lord of mad men]

Thank you greatly for you help and for your kind words. I a glad you understood the brave part because few know what a brave is.

[Tori Jones]

Nicely penned, so perfect... Great job Mad Lord!

[Lord of mad men]

Thank you for you kind words

[Tori Jones]

You're very, very, very, very welcome...